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BSC
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0 posted 2000-08-10 08:11 AM



The glow from your eyes
creates a halo of love
that surrounds my heart


[This message has been edited by BSC (edited 08-10-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Bonnie Church - All Rights Reserved
Dennis L. White
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1 posted 2000-08-10 08:43 AM


Bonnie,
  This is a beautiful poem of commited love and devotion.Write on Sister!
Dennis :^)


Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

Jon Mewett
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2 posted 2000-08-10 11:31 AM


Now that is GOOD

I liiiiikkkkeeeeee iiiiit

Jon

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3 posted 2000-08-10 12:47 PM


What a great one, can't wait for more
Elizabeth
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4 posted 2000-08-10 02:22 PM


Beautiful and loving.

Elizabeth


Why ME???

ellie LeJeune
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5 posted 2000-08-10 05:55 PM


Bonnie; Oh, WOW, this is so romantic and so lovely. Great job! Love, ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

Jamie
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6 posted 2000-08-10 06:12 PM


Beautiful.

Tender heart within
this bright halo of my love
sets my eyes aglow

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7 posted 2000-08-10 07:09 PM


Bonnie~

Such endearing thoughts
From a heart so filled with love
Set the page aglow

~*Marge*~





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8 posted 2000-08-11 12:13 PM


very nice...  

dg

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9 posted 2000-08-11 05:23 AM


this is so heartwarming.... thanx for sharing your happiness with us
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