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Little_Spyro
Senior Member

since 2000-01-09

Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA

0 posted 2000-08-05 11:43 AM

Looking for some food
The tantalizing sweet smell
In dragon's nostrils.

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

1 posted 2000-08-05 11:59 AM

Sam,
WOW! A Dragon Haiku! WELL DONE my dragon friend!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2000-08-05 12:48 PM

Little Spyro-
WOW! This is great! I love it.
Wonderful job on this.

These haikus really are fun
aren't they.

-vicky

"I have read your words, and within
them I have found your heart.
-vlraynes

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

3 posted 2000-08-05 03:20 PM

heehee..you funny little dragon!

love it..
dg

"Half of what i say is meaningless; but i say it so that the other half may reach you."
-Kahlil Gibran

deleeme
Senior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

4 posted 2000-08-05 04:29 PM

Your first haiku of many- what with this wonderful start! David

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2000-08-05 06:20 PM

Little_Spyro~

Dragon's Bar-B-Que
Table setting just for two
Guaranteed, Home-cooked

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Alle'cram
Senior Member

since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

6 posted 2000-08-05 06:35 PM

Hi! Great job, Can't believe it's your first one.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

7 posted 2000-08-05 08:07 PM

Great job, Sam! I do believe that you could do anything at all that you set your mind to!

Denise

Jon Mewett
Senior Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 1304

8 posted 2000-08-06 06:07 AM

A Dragon can do anything even write great Japanese stuff.......nice one Spyro

Jon

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

9 posted 2000-08-06 06:26 AM

^_^ Well done Spyro!!

Luv,
Lynne

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

10 posted 2000-08-11 06:03 AM

this gave me a big smile on my face..pls do carry on writing...

BSC

Moderator

Member Elite

since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

11 posted 2000-08-11 07:54 AM

Wonderful!!!! Bonnie

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

12 posted 2000-08-11 10:17 AM

Ooooooh, what a great thought you put into my head with this one!

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