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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon 
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Once in Love I have once fallen in love with you, the traces of this wonderful, yet, wonderous feeling may never, vanish from my soul. So hopelessly have I once been in love with you and, silently I fight with my cowardishness and bear the pain of jealousy, only to once more, behold your gentle sweet smile. May my feeling never disturb you again, and may it never add to your sorrow. I have once loved you so tenderly, so deeply, and I wish someone will just love you as I once have. - James The beauty of nature is displayed, not through itself, but through the creatures dwelling within its bosom. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely outpouring from your heart James!  |
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Esmeralda Ponsonby Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 138 |
This is beautiful, and sad both. May you one day find happiness yourself.  |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
This is beautiful James. It's always hard to start a new chapter in life. ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
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kelieth Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 314Normal IL - USA |
Unfortunately it seems to happen to often. Great way of describing that hard feeling and good luck to ya. Kevin "Anything is possible with patience, time is the tool use it to reach your goals." |
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PrincessPoet Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 133Long Beach, Calif. |
 Very Nice! To be who u are and become what u are capable of is the only goal worth living. ~Alvin Ailey Poetry & Friendship PrincessPoet |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
jamesjiao, you have captured that painful feeling of unrequited love so well...love the second stanza best...cowardishness,pain of jealously,behold your gentle sweet smile...true words that most of us can surely identify with... great poem here...i look 4ward to reading more of ur stuff |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
well written, James.. very beautiful.. I'm glad u submitted this one, as it is hard to vote for such lovely poetry like this, otherwise.. ^^ Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Just realised I didn't vote when I replied earlier.. woops.. ok, fixed now.. ^^ -Me |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Chock-full of love and sadness...*midnightblues sniffles* Here's my vote!*S* love, michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
love this james! "love hurts when only ones in love" --rick springfield true aye.. dg "i speak in written word--my lips, no sound may utter..." dgvarner |
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