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Sasikat
Member

since 2000-02-02

Posts 290
St. Petersburg, FL

0 posted 2000-02-03 04:59 PM

I await the time when my love can flow
like the current in a stream.
and, wake up to find that it wasn't
just an image in a night's dream.

I await the time of knowing satisfaction
and fulfillment can be very sweet,
and, be enriched with the feeling
that life holds more than defeat.

I await the time when harmonious balance
moves in and breaks this life's existing mold,
and sets sail to happiness
without losing firm hold.

I await the time when there's glory
in the emotions I feel,
and realize that felicity exists
as my heart's love is revealed.

I await the time when all
of this comes to be.
Or, am I just a fool
not willing to face reality?

I await........................................

Gene
Senior Member

since 2000-01-23

Posts 935
Colorado, USA

1 posted 2000-02-03 05:25 PM

Yep, I'm still waiting too. What a Beautiful poem, Sasikat.

~Gene

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-02-03 06:53 PM

This is so beautiful, Sasikat! I love the imagery! Well done!

Denise

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-02-03 08:59 PM

no"fool" wrote this lovely poem...very nice... full of sentiment...sometimes love make us feel this way... I guess its teaching us to be patient...I was never very good at being patient...(smile)
take care, janet marie

Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie

Exile
Junior Member

since 2000-01-23

Posts 42

4 posted 2000-02-03 10:33 PM

This is a most touching poem; the message of resilience and hope should resonate with everyone who reads it.

One cannot help but wish for you to "Hang on! Everything you're waiting for will come to you!!"

And I hope it does, soon....

Exile

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 2000-02-04 08:55 AM

Wonderful! So now, I await your next one!

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

6 posted 2000-02-04 04:37 PM

Another very good poem, but please don't forget to live while "waiting".

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-04-06

Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere

7 posted 2000-04-14 06:14 AM

I wait, too.. But I've a wonderful friend who says he'll show me a place where I won't have to wait anymore.. Wonderful poem..

MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU,
MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK
MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE
THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS
AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN,
MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND

Irish Blessing

jamesjiao
Member

since 2000-04-12

Posts 268
Backwaters of Avalon

8 posted 2000-04-14 06:48 AM

Well, Sasi, I have the same experience as you, see I am waiting for someone as well, and I just can't face the reality. But I believe myself and this is the most important.. Good poem, I can't wait to see more of your poems.

Jõmes

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