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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
You watch them grow From the time they are born You live through the terrible 2s Portrayed with a golden halo And those angelic smiles There go the fearsome fours Now learning 2 write Seven hours in school What to expect when they're six? Adventures and dirt They're always at play Even when they are eight years old Now we skip forward 2 not such great times 2 the age of fifteen Jose Cuervo and Mary Juana Begin 2 enhance the lives Of children called "fifteen" Where 1ce was 'angelic' Now lies 'stoned' 4 our fallen angels Life defines no more than what it is you ask for. April 20, 2000 Alicia A. Renzelman |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Nice one Alicia,just pick up their wings and keep em safe they'll want them back later. Jon |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Thanks Jon. I like that theory! |
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epoet Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 291grand rapid,MI, usa |
great poem, it's so true. very touching and heartfelt emotion. couldn't have said it better |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I like Jon's theory, as well! I've never heard it put quite that way before, but it is so true! I love your poem, too, Alicia! Denise |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
I guess no one has noticed, but I got this idea from a response to another poem. The numbers I used instead of words add up to 15. alicia [This message has been edited by Alicia Renzelman (edited 05-11-2000).] |
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