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John the cat
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0 posted 2000-05-03 06:35 PM


4th of May

Today to Star Wars fans I say,
A very happy fourth of May,
So all of you aficionados,
Get out your books and videos.

Remind yourself of story line,
Tomorrow you can consign,
Your Star Wars stuff to under bed,
But on this day it must be said,
'I kept the faith and I was true,
To Obi Wan and Yoda too,
I worshipped names like Luke Skywalker,
Of Hans Solo I was a talker,
I wished to death would go Darth Vader,
Against evil Empire I was crusader.'

These are my words this special day,
Delivered in my rhyming way,
With no further fuss or ballyhoo,
May the fourth be with you.






© Copyright 2000 John A Brown - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-05-03 08:48 PM


This is delightful, John! It seems like only yesterday that I was at the movies watching the first Star Wars movie. My, how time does fly!

Denise

JOY 14
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2 posted 2000-05-03 08:55 PM


John, Great! I love Star Wars.  Okay, maybe I don't love it. But I like it!  

Joy

freckles
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since 2000-02-12
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3 posted 2000-05-04 12:06 PM


JTC--Another wonderful poem....I love the play on words!!  Good to see another post by you!  

 "Unto thine own self be true, and it must follow as the night, the day; thou cans't not be false to any man."---Shakespeare

ESP
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4 posted 2000-05-04 04:47 AM


I hate star wars but I think your poem is really good anyway! I enjoyed it plenty!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Jon Mewett
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5 posted 2000-05-04 07:10 AM


So all of you aficinados
Get out your books and videos

That cat is a beaut as they say in OZ

Thats one for my store.

Good one

Jon

blackhalo
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6 posted 2000-05-04 11:22 AM


Adorable John!  I can't wait to read the other one!

 Life defines no more than what it is you ask for.
April 20, 2000
Alicia A. Renzelman

John the cat
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7 posted 2000-05-06 07:13 PM


Thank you all for your kind words.

Alicia...What other one?

Yu Lan
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since 2000-04-13
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8 posted 2000-05-06 07:23 PM


hehehe, aah, great poem, John.. "may the fourth be with you.." ^_^


Thoroughly enjoyable..
Lynne

John the cat
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since 2000-03-23
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9 posted 2000-05-07 05:59 PM


Thank you Lynne....Glad you 'Got' the tag..
twinsgd
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since 2000-02-13
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Ontario,Canada
10 posted 2000-05-10 02:19 AM


Nithe poem John...really enjoyed it
But what ith thith tag thing.

Jack

Broken_Winged_Angel
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11 posted 2000-05-10 02:33 AM


  May the fourth be with you, too.  Enchanting. I really enjoyed it.  

 I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell.

John the cat
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England
12 posted 2000-05-11 11:23 AM


Jack....lol. ecthtremely hilariouth...

Angel...Thank you )

blackhalo
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13 posted 2000-05-11 01:30 PM


John
The other poem that you had posted the same day.
Alicia


 Life defines no more than what it is you ask for.
April 20, 2000
Alicia A. Renzelman

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