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Artur Hawkwing
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since 1999-06-30
Posts 444
USA

0 posted 1999-12-21 04:37 PM


"The Forever Friend"

On my own, but mostly the savannah,
Where the tumbleweeds fade away and die,
Before the glassy sun burns a summer of crystals,
The glistering waters of the high seas
Of which was so far a place as of where vultures roam.
I looked around but you weren't anywhere...
You used to say that you would never die,
But I took the wrong meaning into my heart.
Now the sea is wild with despair,
Deep blue like a prairie of flowers blue,
Where all children of God rest in eternal peace.
I saw you at the end,
You and I, brother and sister of nature,
Brother and sister of heaven and earth,
Your usually calm and heavenly eyes full of tears,
Bitterly falling one after one into a river,
Then the river of life turned red in blood.
My eyes watched in horror...
Slowly and deadly your heart became poisoned,
You disappeared without saying good-bye,
Not a word came out of your mouth...
You became like desolation in its grave.
When once the skies were a realm of stars
And the sun shone brightly in summer skies,
You were there to share the calmness;
But now I stand here in midst of the tallgrass
And only the savannah remains.


[This message has been edited by Artur Hawkwing (edited 12-21-1999).]

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Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
1 posted 1999-12-22 05:50 AM


I like this very much!

 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


littleJas
Junior Member
since 1999-12-22
Posts 39
Australia
2 posted 1999-12-22 08:23 AM


I thought this was really good , I liked it alot
Artur Hawkwing
Member
since 1999-06-30
Posts 444
USA
3 posted 1999-12-22 05:53 PM


It's good to hear that you liked it a lot!
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