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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 1999-11-14 06:33 PM


She is real

In unbelief I tribute,
A face could lay the moon away.
Eyes of a doe in play,
And hair of golden sway.

And here beats a heart taken.
A soul that is held in awe.
Touch by another rapport
With eyes that I adore.

My heart beats to her rhythm.
Subject to a dreamers mind,
Essence of grace and kind,
A heart without the rind.

Harps me into throngs of love,
Seconds seem eternity,
Gone is uncertainty
To endless guaranty.

Perhaps I overstate the preen,
But most will feel what I mean.

© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
1 posted 1999-11-14 06:57 PM


I feel what you mean
I know what you feel
(You know what I mean)
Elizabeth

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-11-14 07:04 PM


I too, know that feeling

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-11-14 07:30 PM


Very beautiful, Seymour! And I too know what you mean!

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Denise


Martie
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since 1999-09-21
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4 posted 1999-11-14 07:36 PM


Seymour this is so beautiful--I think your words could lay the moon away.
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 1999-11-14 08:14 PM


Elizabeth,
Nice answer, thank you much.
Isis,
I knew you would, thank you.
Denise,
Thanks for the beautiful, you are one of those hearts without a rind.
Martie,
Ah! paid back in turn, thank you so much.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
6 posted 1999-11-14 09:58 PM


Oh my, this is absolutely beautiful. Your talents amaze me

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)


Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
7 posted 1999-11-14 10:53 PM


Hoot,
Read your comment just before retiring and I will sleep well. Thank you.

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