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Nan
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0 posted 2001-12-10 09:06 PM


Imagery it is, folks - This is from an old workshop - but it works ... Choose your own style for this poem. If you want to write in formatted (sonnet, pantoum, villanelle, etc.) or free verse, it's your choice.. But you've gotta use some imagery..

So - What's imagery? Imagery is simply the use of figurative language in your writing... The following is an excerpt from a previous workshop where we described the most commonly used basic forms:....
quote:

Simile - A comparison using as or like. Check out Ron's Tormented Love - Triumphant Hate and see if you can find one. - Yep - "like lemmings led to our own fall" (ROFTL - I had to look it up too!! - I love it when that happens).

Metaphor - A comparison that doesn't use "as" or "like", but rather uses one idea to represent another. Munda's Walk With Me is a good example of a metaphor. Life is not a path, but this poem makes it one - without using "as" or "like".

Extended Metaphor - This involves the entire poem in a metaphorical comparison. Read XAngel's On Closing Old Doors and you'll see how she uses the old doors in the poem to represent incomplete issues in her life, and she does it nicely.

Personification - Is giving the attributes of life to an inanimate entity. Snow in Summer does a very nice job in her untitled poem. She's got "pumpkins perching on the porch" and "plumply slumbering" (and more). This is also Alliteration, btw - that's repeated syllable sounds for a great effect.



Those are the basics... Let's see what we can put together here... Our Theme is Optional...

We're going to incorporate some Imagery...

Our format is optional...

Should be easy, eh?... Well - effective use of imagery can be quite a challenge...

Just remember....

Writing a simile is as easy as pie..
but
Writing a metaphor is a piece of cake..!!




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1 posted 2001-12-10 10:21 PM


can i play?
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2 posted 2001-12-11 09:54 AM


Mizzzzzzz Nanny can I watch from the side.....I don't know if I can make it ...oh my....did I said that I would try one...oh my.....poor lil me  

But will do my best, even if it takes a year to post mine....:lol:

Charisma

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3 posted 2001-12-11 05:25 PM


imagery..
whatsaimagery?


Just jokin, Nanners...just peekin' in.
I'm afraid to say I'll participate because every time I want to so much, I don't get time or my muse chooses that time to play hide and seek. *sigh*  

Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since

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4 posted 2001-12-11 07:51 PM


Im in defenitely, as soon as I've figured out what your talking about  

Will be back to read properly, don't have time now

Sweet Nanniness, applepie oké?

Tried but can't open the links though

Titia


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Want to use the pics on my website? Just let me know. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace  

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 12-11-2001).]

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5 posted 2001-12-20 01:29 AM


Oh boy!   I am with Titia, what are you talking about?  LOL, show me one first and I maybe I can try one.  To me this is like dancing, you lead and I will follow as I don't want Nan's big old eraser after me.

~*~ The Very Best Of The Season To You And Yours ~*~

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6 posted 2001-12-20 03:17 PM


See Nan what happens when you use "old" links?
Sorry guys, I have little time at the moment, but will return soon!

Ron's Tormented Love - Triumphant Hate: /pip/Forum20/HTML/000185.html

Munda's Walk With Me: /pip/Forum20/HTML/000684.html

XAngel's On Closing Old Doors: /pip/Forum20/HTML/000507.html

Snow in Summer's untitled: /pip/Forum20/HTML/000661.html


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7 posted 2001-12-21 09:42 AM


Hmm... dunno - The links all work for me...
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