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my love |
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mahi_mahi New Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 5 |
to my dearest brandi the one whom i care for to my dearest brandi i do love you so you are what completes me in every single way you are what completes me though you are far away one of these days we will be together one of these days we'll share a love like no other i love you brandi o yes i do i love you brandi ill always stay true Gilly |
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mahi_mahi New Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 5 |
im not much of a poet plz send some feedback of what you think thank you |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions. I think you have stated your feelings very well in this work. Keep writing and keep posting. |
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Marissa Junior Member
since 1999-12-25
Posts 20 |
great poem! I hope you gave this to brandi! Keep writing! |
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