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lisaloco New Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 7 |
Reason Why I cried a tear of love for you, the one I will never have. I cried a tear of pain for me, as my poor heart slowly broke in half. I cried for all the times we've had, that I prayed would never end. I cried for all the times unseen, those moments we will never spend. I cried for every warm touch from you, when my breath was taken away. I cried for the coldness now felt on my skin, the emptiness grows everyday. I cried because you are the only one, unveiling my emotions inside. I smiled because you are the only one, and that is the reason why. |
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destiny502 Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 57OH |
oh wow! this is a GREAT poem! the pain expressed is so overwhelming it makes me wanna cry! is this from personal experience? i know how it feels..but really an awesome poem!! i cant wait to see more from you! [This message has been edited by destiny502 (edited 12-19-1999).] |
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Mario21 Junior Member
since 1999-12-17
Posts 11 |
That was a very touching poem the pain portrayed made me feel weak inside. I enjoyed very much and you should persist with your talent. |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
I find that crying is the best way to let all your emotions out...you feel so much better afterwards too...great poem btw... Starboards "I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget" |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wow, this is exellent! Welcome to Passions, I cannot wait for more work from you!  *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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Singer1981 Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148Fredonia, NY USA |
Wow. This was really good. It totally explains what I'm feeling right now. And you were able to express even better than I was in the poem I just wrote. I totally feel your pain...can't wait to hear more from you. |
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Fairy Colours Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 169Sunrise,Fl,US |
I totally agree with Singer here. I wanna cry too. --A Little Fairy-- |
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