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Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-12-08 08:02 PM


As time is pouring from the bottle
Last drops of wine into my glass,
Let’s enter through the liquid puddle
I’m sure that there’s a place for us.

Among the clouds’ confusing patterns,
We’ll find the room to build a home
And live together- that’s what matters-
We’ll live together all alone!

And in the backyard, in our garden,
We’ll plant the stars and everyday,
Our dreams will grow with fervent ardor
And lap the mild Milky Way

We’ll live without a single worry
Enthralled in happiness and love
Let all the people read our story
While gazing at us from above

This dream to me has been so thrilling
That even now, I’m still amazed.
And water’s dripping from the ceiling
Into my glass and on my face.


© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
JEBE
Junior Member
since 1999-11-02
Posts 32
WILMINGTON, NC, USA
1 posted 1999-12-08 08:12 PM


WOW...THATS ABOUT ALL I CAN SAY...YOUR VIEWS ARE AMAZING ..AND HOW YOU CAN PUT DEEP MATTERS INTO ELEGANT WORDS THAT WIND TOGETHER BRAVO...
      
                       JEBE


Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA
2 posted 1999-12-08 10:05 PM


Thanks Jebe! You've just defined a poet... *S*
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