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I'm in Love (repost from Teen 1)
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I'm in Love (repost from Teen 1) |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
I can't stop it It won't go away I can't stop anything My misery stays Like a band-aid Like a pill Like a cigarrette Like my blood spilled It's all a quick fix Nobody cares I'm addicted to hate I'm hooked on despair Dishwasher clean And filthy as dirt What can I say? I'm in love with the hurt ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
have hope my dear they rhyming was very nice quick and too the point i luved it.. good job!  ------------------ Don't Fall.. Rise in Love -------823------- |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Awesome!!! It was great. you are veryyyyyy talented. If you want to read my work,you can. |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Thank you star fairy..... Allysa...may I ask why you said I can read your work? by posting it here, everyone can read it. I am not trying to be rude, just trying to understand. ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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Tina TT Junior Member
since 1999-11-01
Posts 45Victoria, Australia |
WOW great, SD!! Great lines and rhyme...(like your signature quote thing too) hey wanna be a guest poet thingy on my site? if ya do, just mail me a few of your faves k (dont know if i've asked you before, but anyways)------------------ ~What if you slept? What if, in your sleep, you dreamed? And in your dream, you went to heaven and there plucked a strange and beautiful flower? And what if, when you awoke, you had that flower in your hand? Aye, what then?~ |
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Blue Eyed Wanderer Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 84Rhode Island, US |
This is really good. Thanks for reposting it, I missed it the first time around. The feeling is too familiar to me... |
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