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LinaInverse
Junior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 18


0 posted 1999-11-08 12:22 PM


YOU TOLD!
By Amber Livingston

I cant belive you!
telling the only secret we shared!
You told ..
You lyed ...
I counted on you ..
and you werent by my side ..
I cant believe you...
The times we shared ...
You had to tell the most sacrete secret of mine..
Who I like...
Friends since 1st grade...
Buddys for 6 years...
Now .. Im not so sure...
I cant trust u like before...
You told...
I HATE YOU!

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Laura Mitchell
Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 76
Cincinnati OH,45238
1 posted 1999-11-08 03:44 PM


Sounds like your friend betrayed you. I hope you are able to work everything out.
Star Fairy 2
Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa
2 posted 1999-11-09 10:44 PM


i feel the deception in this one
i've had it done to me
but forgiveness is the best gift


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Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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