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Teen Poetry #2

just one chance

luv2luvu
New Member

since 1999-11-07

Posts 7
wayne, mi, usa

0 posted 1999-11-07 09:45 PM

i think about oyu all the time
i wish that i could make you mine

i want you to know just how i feel
and let you know this love is real

why dont you like me as i like you
i just want to hear you feel this way too

the first time i saw you, i wanted you so
im telling you this, i need you to know

i wish that you could actually see
how much you really mean to me

just once,thats not much to ask
all im asking for is just one chance

Laura Mitchell
Member

since 1999-11-05

Posts 76
Cincinnati OH,45238

1 posted 1999-11-07 09:49 PM

absolutely beautiful!

Star Fairy 2
Member

since 1999-09-06

Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa

2 posted 1999-11-09 10:47 PM

quite profound.

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