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Last date with Autumn |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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The thirsty stars licked water out of puddles The crispy breeze roamed through the lonely streets I chewed my cotton candy, and the clouds Would disconnect into the tiny threads and bits The restless night would lean against my shoulders The streetlights shinned directly in my eyes But nothing passed my skin, my flesh, my fortress I walked without a care, like hypnotized So here we are and this, our final date together Let’s make it seem eternal and unique And I shall wait for you, for worse and for the better Afraid to hear “good-bye,” we do not speak ------------------ I fell in love and kept on falling |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
You are an aboslute genius with words young man. The flow is smooth, the theme progresses beautifully. I am a great fan of yours. Keep up the great work. |
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April Resi Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 119Alabama |
oh--such imagery! You are so very good with words! I like it very much! |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Marilyn, I agree I'm a genuis, but don't tell others, they may get jealous. LOL April, thanks again! |
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