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chic
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since 2000-01-26
Posts 245
yellville, Ar, U.S.

0 posted 2000-02-08 02:42 PM


There is a girl
18 yrs of age.
She made me read her my diary
every single page.

Some have said
she couldn't hurt a flea.
That's because
she beats on me.

She may be mean
rude and unkind.
But sis she's my sis
I don't pay no mind.

She can be sweet
when she wants to be.
But she's the only one
who understands me.

I must say
she is a brat.
And even sometimes
a little rat.

But the only title
that can be gave.
Is the one for her
when she misbehaves.

THE DWEEB!!!!!

there u go sis, genuine and true poem just for you u little dweeb!

Stay cool and out of trouble


 To be or not to be...that is the question.

© Copyright 2000 Barbara Mendoza - All Rights Reserved
sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
1 posted 2000-02-08 03:13 PM


SIS! you told them almost everything! How dare you ruin my reputation as a sweet little innocent girl! I've held that title for 18 years and now it's ruined! ha ha! cute poem sis...

Oh..and trouble is my middle name!  

stay cool sis...  

[This message has been edited by sweetcollege_girl (edited 02-08-2000).]

chic
Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245
yellville, Ar, U.S.
2 posted 2000-02-08 03:15 PM


cute sis i know aaaaaaaaaaall about it
angel6917
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
3 posted 2000-02-08 03:46 PM


Cute poem!  It sounds like something I should do to my little sister when she gets older...  But, I don't think it'll work, 'cuz everyone knows I'm not sweet and innocent, even though I try to be.  Oh, well....
~Kristi Lynn

 "Why does no one sees how hard I cry?" -Me

Mistikman
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 682
San Jose, CA, USA
4 posted 2000-02-08 06:11 PM


Heh, what an interesting tribute to give to a sibling   Wonderful poem, chic  

 I am not a poet, I am merely one who speaks in emotion

Majestic
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since 2000-01-11
Posts 264
houston, tx.
5 posted 2000-02-08 10:12 PM


good poem...very humerous....

 "To live is to love; To truly LOVE is to live!" ~kg~



sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
6 posted 2000-02-09 09:11 AM


thanks for all the replies..don't you feel sorry for me???


stay cool

~~Lavada~~

chic
Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245
yellville, Ar, U.S.
7 posted 2000-02-09 09:21 AM


no!!!! don't feel sorry for her!!!!! feel sorry for me i have to live with it
thanx for the replies all
stay cool

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