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redwriter1
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since 1999-07-22
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0 posted 1999-10-16 12:40 PM


If but love
could be as sweet as it's promise

I will forever wonder
which is true

the hope and faith
that love exists
or the real thing

or is it the hope and faith
the make us belive and hence
make love a real thing?



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RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
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1 posted 1999-10-16 01:14 AM


Good question Red...

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


Deverone
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since 1999-10-13
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San Antonio, Tx, USA
2 posted 1999-10-16 03:50 AM


As said before .....good question.

Nice piece though. Kind of direct and forward...no sugar coating. I enjoyed it.

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Deverone

"We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out".

----Ray Bradbury---



Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
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3 posted 1999-10-16 06:40 AM


Thought provoking piece.Liked this one much.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

redwriter1
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since 1999-07-22
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Franklin, TN
4 posted 1999-10-16 01:14 PM


WHAT? No answers? Speculations? (smile)
Denise
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5 posted 1999-10-16 01:24 PM


...hmmmm...could be! I dunno! Great poem,though!

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Denise

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