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Ominous
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 68
Canada

0 posted 1999-07-04 05:32 AM

The sheer beauty,
just takes my breath away,
The colors of the rainbow,
reflecting off the lake.

The water so calm and peaceful,
A melancholic green.
Out where you are one with yourself,
out where you are free.

The sun peaks through the clouds,
as if to show us the way.
The way to pure happiness,
and the peace of which we pray.

The majestic beauty of it all,
the beauty found only in dreams,
the beauty God has created,
now lives and grows through me.

For I have seen this glorious place,
where the sun shines oh so bright.
The beauty has touched my very soul,
and ended years of plight.

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I am but a shadow, lost within this world of darkness

Kelly
Member

since 1999-07-03

Posts 145

1 posted 1999-07-04 05:41 AM

Very good. I also enjoyed the one about the lone wolf.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 1999-07-04 10:10 AM

Welcome to the family! Lovely poem, I look forward to reading more from you!

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

3 posted 1999-07-04 12:09 PM

Very good, you captured my senses and took me away to this beautiful place.

Artur Hawkwing
Member

since 1999-06-30

Posts 444
USA

4 posted 1999-07-05 02:10 AM

Just hanging around the second page tonight.. Love this, the way the land is enhanced through the senses. You've got ambiance on your winning side.

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

5 posted 1999-07-05 04:43 AM

Great work, dear. I look forward to more.

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I would devour you save that you would no longer be there.

Ominous
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 68
Canada

6 posted 1999-07-06 12:36 PM

I thank you all for your wonderful words.
It gives me great joy that others can share what I feel, through my writing.

Ominous
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 68
Canada

7 posted 1999-07-26 03:14 AM

=)

elvira
Senior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

8 posted 1999-07-26 03:40 AM

a lovely positive message...good to see your poetry isn't always blue

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If I had my mouth I would bite.
If I had my liberty I would do my liking.
In the mean time, let me be that I am, and seek not to alter me. ~~~Shakespeare~~~

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