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thymesorrow
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since 1999-06-28
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a place i dont want to be

0 posted 1999-06-28 06:42 PM


I'll rise with timeless elagance
From a pool of streaming blood.
This world may call it obsession,
But I will call it love.
Lost in the glow of my Ivory skin.
What would it take to make me blush.
Thought the countless dead lie before me,
I know its never enough.
Come and lay becide me
On this bed of broken bones.
Deep inside this endless graveyard
My heart has found a home.
My sins and my atrocitys
Number more than i can tell.
And i know my heaven
Is straight down in hell.


Eternally in sorrow

Thyme

© Copyright 1999 thymesorrow - All Rights Reserved
Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA
1 posted 1999-06-28 07:30 PM


Quite disturbing. Thank you for the emotion.

Andrew

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