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dimples22
Junior Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 30


0 posted 1999-07-25 10:24 PM


Remember how badly
the tin man wanted a brain.
Was it really cause he needed it
for times when he felt insane.
Did the tin man really know the
trouble it would cause.
Sometimes your brain is active
and sometimes it takes a pause.


Did you ever wonder what
would happen if you didn't have a brain.
Just going through life ignorant
and never feeling pain.


Did you ever think your brain
fully knows your soul or does
it play tricks on all of those you know.

So I often time have wondered why
we need a brain, only to come up with
the same answer, time and time again.

The brain is your only tool
to finding out who you are.
And it's the brain you use
to see that you've come far.

[This message has been edited by dimples22 (edited 07-26-99).]

© Copyright 1999 dimples22 - All Rights Reserved
poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
1 posted 1999-07-25 10:40 PM


Good Gawd I feel your frustration - I really do!! LOL Sometimes I wish I could take my brain out, put it in a jar, and just "chill..." without it for awhile! Mine gets me in quite a bit of trouble - anytime my life gets miserable, it's because of that damn brain of mine!! I truly understand you!

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet


dimples22
Junior Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 30

2 posted 1999-07-26 02:36 AM


I'm glad to see someone understands my work.
~one voice~
Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664
Billings, MT USA
3 posted 1999-07-26 02:43 AM


hey dimps... I feel that frustration too... I like the subject you chose to express that frustration! Though I must tell you, I had a brian once, and he just wasn't worth it...hehehe... and as for a brain... if I only had one!

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~onevoice~

"I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart."


dimples22
Junior Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 30

4 posted 1999-07-26 02:50 AM


Thank you voice for your support, as usual it was a god sent.

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I'm not a writer, just an observer of detail, lol.

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