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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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Whisper...whisper to my soul Magic words to make me whole Mystic is your soul with mine... You and I...merge...entwine. The love we share is mystic - mental... Distance - Time - accidental. Dream of me as night befalls you... The moon above shines simply for you. |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
A beautiful sensation. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
except for the rhyme of the last 2 lines, it is excellent. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! This is good. I look forward to reading the others you posted today!  |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Thank You all for your words of encouragement! I'm flattered to hear from the Best Of The Best!! I've been reading much of your work before I decided to post my own & have already become fans of many of you!! Much of my poetry is erotic though, poet Devine, you are truly one of my favorites!!!! Thanks for your comments! ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Beautiful...I love it. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "It's a crazy thing, fate has perfect wings..."-Deanna Carter |
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