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Cinderella
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since 1999-06-23
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Arizona

0 posted 1999-07-25 02:36 AM


Love has finally come to me
In a strange and wondrous way
By the warmth of his touch and kisses
Upon me as we lay.

So many years have passed away
Since I have felt affection.
Now, in the mirror I can look
And beam at my reflection.

Knowing it's a once in a lifetime affair
Brings no regrets - I do not care.
The touch of his skin - his hair, oh, so nice!
Gave me memories to last for life.

My dreams will begin with him on my mind.
He will always be one of a kind.
I thank him so much and, let it be known,
Because of that night a true lady has grown.




[This message has been edited by Cinderella (edited 07-26-99).]

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Delores Hall
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since 1999-07-16
Posts 342
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1 posted 1999-07-25 10:41 AM


What a wonderful poem.Happy writing.
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 1999-07-25 11:34 PM


Nicely written, speaks to the sentimental.
Cinderella
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 152
Arizona
3 posted 1999-07-26 02:23 AM


Thank you for your kind replies, but this poem needed a touch up - so two heads are better than one!

[This message has been edited by Cinderella (edited 07-26-99).]

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