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blueloon
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 161
NY

0 posted 1999-07-08 03:14 PM


easier said then done.
two words.
two lives.
how simular the parellel.
throw it all away.
never speak.

close her like a fan,
letting no life prevail.
reopen her to a world,
a world so old to her.
watch her coming back.
the drive all too familiar.

coming back only shows,
only shows how far she ran.
running from stories
she didn't want to hear.
leaving, made them dissapear.

dissapearing like the smoke
burning from a cigarrette.
out of her life,
deeper into her mind,
burning her soul.

lies of love never
change.
lies of fear always
near.
words of apology never
stirred.

But now it's time.
she feels the need,
the need to clearly see.
to set her free from the
painful trap.

hello again.
goodbye again.
she's sorry for the
first time.
take her hand,
place it above your heart.
hear her words as they
rust within your ears.

"hello again.
i'm sorry."
like the wind she's
gone again.

© Copyright 1999 blueloon - All Rights Reserved
thursdayschild
Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 169
Houston, Tx.
1 posted 1999-07-25 09:16 PM


This is a worthwhile read...great work here.
Thanks blueloon.

Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
2 posted 1999-07-25 09:58 PM


Very nicely put, Blueloon. I admire your abilities.
blueloon
Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 161
NY
3 posted 1999-07-26 09:39 AM


Thank you for the continued support.
blueloon

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