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Song Of The Soul
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Song Of The Soul |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon 
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Every love song I hear reminds me of you. Each time as fresh as the morning dew. A sweet wind of music blows thru my soul. A tinkling of refrain, melodiously whole. The spirit of a woman, in love with a man. You have touched me in ways no other can. My soul sings a love song no other can hear, And it whispers sweet nonsense for you,my dear. A song filled with passion, with love and with grace. My fingers reach out to stroke your sweet face. The love in your eyes sets my heart on fire. A smouldering bank of passionate desire. A look, a glance, a touch, a kiss. All of this I knew I would miss. But in all of the things that I missed most, Was the song in my soul; such a silent ghost. And now it sings out so vibrant and clear. And it whispers sweet nonsense for you, my dear. (c) 6/15/99 ------------------ Words lay dormant in the recesses of the mind til called forth to a labor of love. By WildChild |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
So wonderfully perfectly romantic  ------------------ Denise |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
True happiness songs from the soul - beautifully written. I enjoyed your poem so much - thankyou.. ------------------ Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels. ~Isis~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful song sung by the soul- beautiful words and poem. Thank you.. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Wow! This was great, well written, lots of heartfelt soul singing here! Great Job! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
"melodiously whole"...that phrase alone would carry this poem.....but it doen't have to. The whole thing is excellent. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Beautiful - the last line is so well fitting, it really personalises the whole poem (especially as you use it twice.) This is an excellent piece of poetry, WildChild. |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Thank you all for your kind words. You have no idea how much it means to me to have you all read my poems and then respond. I don't feel all alone out there anymore. Thanks again ------------------ Words lay dormant in the recesses of the mind til called forth to a labor of love. By WildChild |
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