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Love Breakdown -or- Bitten But Not Blue
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Love Breakdown -or- Bitten But Not Blue |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration 
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Through a cyclone of confusion -I ponder- the simplistic complexity of a multiple singularity simple by nature it is a silent inescapable attack on the soul complex is the outcome changing forever viewpoints goals and dreams of solidarity multiple occurrences the assault a shotgun scatter surely not an arrow singularly it molds each union to a unique beauteous realm of its own |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Quantum singularity by any chance? Complex verse my friend, of course.  ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I'm stuttering. This is...is...so you! I'm enriched (more, if possible) by this. The shotgun scatter as opposed to an arrow - wow. |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Simplistic complexity of a multiple singularity....Love that part. Christopher, you are a trip!  Excellent writing, as always! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very well written....the format does it justice!! ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
no kidding, very complex, I could never write something this complex, but I love reading yours, great work |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Thank you thank you thank you... You are so me K! iloveit- never is the foulest word in the english language. Anything is yours, if you only try, and believe. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This was great Christopher. Described so well. A way with words! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Christopher, If I were a bug I'd crawl into your ear just to see what's really going on in there! I found this piece both singularly complex and complexing to my singularity. Loved it. ------------------ Michael Anderson And so, being young and dipt in folly I fell in love with melancholy, But dreams - of those who dream as I, Aspiringly, are damned, and die: EAP |
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