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pun83
Junior Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 26
FALMOUTH ,MA. U.S.A

0 posted 1999-08-07 08:34 AM


The beach is full of sandy peach colored dunes;
The forest is covered in leaves and twigs.
Don't you know that butterflies have cocoons,
And Old McDonald had a farm of pigs?

The city has all kinds of tall buildings;
The country is filled with flowers and hills.
Baseball teams play on all types of fieldings
Don't you know that the venom of a snake kills?

The suburbs are full of little small houses;
The ocean is full of mineral salt.
Don't you know that girls wear blouses,
And that traffic comes to a fast halt?

Now all these places are in a kind of jumble;
Just go and be kind and don't act humble.

© Copyright 1999 pun83 - All Rights Reserved
JP
Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343
Loomis, CA
1 posted 1999-08-08 01:24 PM


I'm looking for a deeper meaning here... is there one which I am missing?

Obscurum per obsurius
JP

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