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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2017-07-03 08:57 PM





Receiving A Letter and Taking A Ride

I took a slow ride
to a small town
to visit a girl I used to know
that now was no longer around,
of course she was living on pleasantly
but not so near to me
she was long gone;
just two weeks after she
graduated from Palmdale High
she said "I gotta go"
and she didn't tell me
or anyone I know why,
she had mentioned to someone,
something about Butte, Montana
but that could have been a lie;
turns out the place she was really going
turned out to be Bullhead City, Arizona
and now the truth was showing
for all that were interested to see
and one of those was me;
I truly missed her and her silly smile
and in just a few hours from now
new times and old memories would collide
I missed her red shorts and her silly smile
so when I received a letter I took a ride.

JamesLee
7/3/17


  

  


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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2017-07-03 10:26 PM


Aw th8s is really sweet james.

2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
2 posted 2017-07-04 09:04 AM


lovable really, I would have take my car ou plane too,


yann

JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
3 posted 2017-07-04 06:10 PM


I couldn't blame you James, for taking that ride.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Poet In Pink
Senior Member
Posts 1066
MI
4 posted 2017-07-05 08:17 PM


When you get there James may the reunion be all that you hope for and the silly smile just as endearing as you remember Alana
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