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effjayel
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At the Crossroads of Infinity

0 posted 2020-07-31 11:23 AM



I believe I'm right where I'm supposed to be
Dealing with what Fate gave to me

As I look back at my past Life
And the Chaos and Carnage left in my wake

All of which came with a heavy cost
A Daughter, Son and Wife were lost

Yes, I am the author and I own the copyright to all of my mistakes


© Copyright 2020 John Lawrence - All Rights Reserved
Paul Wilson
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1 posted 2020-07-31 01:05 PM


John...Touching write. If this is true my heart goes out to you...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

effjayel
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At the Crossroads of Infinity
2 posted 2020-07-31 03:43 PM


All true Paul and thank you for your kind words. Stay safe my friend
Michael
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3 posted 2020-08-01 04:05 AM


If poetry was weighted on a power vs number of words scale...this would be the hands down winner out of everything I've ever read.  

I'm torn between lauding and aching.  Very well written expression here.

Michael

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4 posted 2020-08-03 11:29 PM


It takes courage to realize and admit such things. I have felt my own attack of karma. It isn't pleasant.  

"How much is real? So much to question
An epidemic of the mannequins
Contaminating everything"

Stone Sour



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5 posted 2020-08-04 11:17 AM


WOW!!! your loss is a clear vision for us to see in your words...I too believe that I am where I am suppose to be...I would not change my past no matter the pain for it have shaped me...thank you for this wonderful read
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