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Temptress
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0 posted 2020-07-25 12:45 PM



What is the worst that can happen?
Satisfied
gratified
energy
released
simultaneously?
Here is my secret.
I've always known
that you were no white knight,
but I don't need one.
I've only ever needed
the love
the lively caress
of your dark hands
bringing all of the things I am
to surrender
on their knees
to your whims.
Be it simple love
or savage mastery, Sir,
I only need to know
when the mood changes.

"How much is real? So much to question
An epidemic of the mannequins
Contaminating everything"

Stone Sour



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Michael
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1 posted 2020-07-25 07:30 AM


lol...Why is it "safe word" was the first thing that popped in my mind when you spoke of the mood changing?

You certainly know how to leave a mark on a page, Jenn.  All devouring.


Michael

augustsky
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2 posted 2020-07-25 10:41 AM


*grins*..I thought the same thing as Michael,   well..certainly livened up my morning.


Sky~


Sometimes..Miracles are just good people
with kind hearts~

Paul Wilson
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3 posted 2020-07-25 03:17 PM


Temptress...Follow your heart. Enjoyed...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2020-07-25 03:40 PM


Temptress,
Wow! I don't know what else to say. Just wow!
~L

Temptress
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5 posted 2020-07-26 01:00 PM


Michael,

Thank you. Why it is a "safe word" is probably best discussed in another forum.

Marks of any kind are good if placed in proper places.  

"How much is real? So much to question
An epidemic of the mannequins
Contaminating everything"

Stone Sour



Temptress
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6 posted 2020-07-26 01:07 PM


Sky,

I'm glad I could liven up your morning.  This one seems to have passed the subtlety test for Open forum. Your grin is an awesome compliment.  

"How much is real? So much to question
An epidemic of the mannequins
Contaminating everything"

Stone Sour



Temptress
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7 posted 2020-07-26 01:12 PM


Paul,

Thank you for reading.  Your comment reminds me of a song by the band, Blue October called King. My heart is a difficult thing to trust these days, but I am trying.  

"How much is real? So much to question
An epidemic of the mannequins
Contaminating everything"

Stone Sour



Temptress
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8 posted 2020-07-26 01:15 PM


Lori,

Thank you. Don't mind me. I'm just running around seeing how many people I can make blush.

"How much is real? So much to question
An epidemic of the mannequins
Contaminating everything"

Stone Sour



Starmcneil 1955
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9 posted 2020-07-26 02:45 PM


So passionate...can't help but feel it...well done
Sven
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10 posted 2020-07-28 12:12 PM


The mood changes when the colors change.
Just look at the ring,..

-- That which gives light must endure burning.
Viktor Frankl

Temptress
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11 posted 2020-07-29 04:22 PM


Starmcneil 1955,

Thank you. There is definitely passion.  I'm glad that it came through clearly.  

"How much is real? So much to question
An epidemic of the mannequins
Contaminating everything"

Stone Sour



Temptress
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12 posted 2020-08-03 10:50 PM


Sven,

Mood ring,huh? I wonder what yours looks like.

"How much is real? So much to question
An epidemic of the mannequins
Contaminating everything"

Stone Sour



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