Open Poetry #50 |
Grant Me This |
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
What is the worst that can happen? Satisfied gratified energy released simultaneously? Here is my secret. I've always known that you were no white knight, but I don't need one. I've only ever needed the love the lively caress of your dark hands bringing all of the things I am to surrender on their knees to your whims. Be it simple love or savage mastery, Sir, I only need to know when the mood changes. "How much is real? So much to question |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
lol...Why is it "safe word" was the first thing that popped in my mind when you spoke of the mood changing? You certainly know how to leave a mark on a page, Jenn. All devouring. Michael |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
*grins*..I thought the same thing as Michael, well..certainly livened up my morning. Sky~ Sometimes..Miracles are just good people with kind hearts~ |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Temptress...Follow your heart. Enjoyed...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Temptress, Wow! I don't know what else to say. Just wow! ~L |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Michael, Thank you. Why it is a "safe word" is probably best discussed in another forum. Marks of any kind are good if placed in proper places. "How much is real? So much to question |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Sky, I'm glad I could liven up your morning. This one seems to have passed the subtlety test for Open forum. Your grin is an awesome compliment. "How much is real? So much to question |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Paul, Thank you for reading. Your comment reminds me of a song by the band, Blue October called King. My heart is a difficult thing to trust these days, but I am trying. "How much is real? So much to question |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Lori, Thank you. Don't mind me. I'm just running around seeing how many people I can make blush. "How much is real? So much to question |
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Starmcneil 1955 Member Posts 174 Alberta, Canada |
So passionate...can't help but feel it...well done |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
The mood changes when the colors change. Just look at the ring,.. -- That which gives light must endure burning. |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Starmcneil 1955, Thank you. There is definitely passion. I'm glad that it came through clearly. "How much is real? So much to question |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Sven, Mood ring,huh? I wonder what yours looks like. "How much is real? So much to question |
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