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0 posted 2014-06-14 09:06 AM





There was a time
When sandstone Oxford shone in summer days
In birdsong breeze, free from future cell phone jingles
Blessed with time to rest and time to ponder
Where Magdalen cloisters cooled the drift of passing hours
~
When carefree dresses swung on rhythm thighs
Along the banks of the lazy Cherwell
Raising eyes and hopes of pubside regulars
Four pints wise in lascivious dreams
~
Where Pine box Emma hawked stolen poetry in St Giles
Coining patronage from a wander of wide-eyed tourists
Then pawned her muse on spiced fried chicken
Surrendered Keats to Colonel Sanders greasy promises
~
There was a time
When we shopped around for friends and lovers
When Lennon supplied the answers
When love lay in Woodstock’s fields of barley
When you and I were young

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BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
1 posted 2014-06-17 07:26 PM


Those days were some of the best..however reckless I was...
those memories are pressed between the pages of my mind forever.  
Liked this a lot...

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
2 posted 2014-06-18 05:26 PM


When you and I were young - Man isn't that the tale of things now-a-days!!

Enjoyed this...

j.

Redstart
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3 posted 2014-06-19 07:33 PM


Absolutely beautiful nostalgia. I was raised on The Thames, and though I wasn't educated in the realm of The Cherwell, I know well, those dreaming spires, and St Giles. The September fair and hotdogs. Swimming at Hinksey, and punting The Cherwell.
Thank you.

Redstart
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4 posted 2014-06-19 07:37 PM


Oh, and I forget to mention: beautifully and passionately written. I know your Woodstock was not New York State. I've wined and dined in The Bear.
Redstart
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5 posted 2014-11-08 08:28 PM


This has to be retured, to be read again. it is magnificent.

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
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6 posted 2014-11-09 12:50 PM


Enjoyed this much.Funny my son who  was at Woodstock now says he is ashamed of all those old men who at that time spouted love and sharing, now are running this country and making a greedy mess of every thing. Where did all that love and drug filled lovers  go? Jo
OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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7 posted 2014-11-10 03:13 PM


Love the "remember when" ambiance.

Owl
    

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