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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2014-03-06 06:51 AM



Slumber rumbles between us
in our blissful oblivion
Our previous entanglement
straightened into spoons


[This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (03-06-2014 08:20 AM).]

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2014-03-06 07:32 AM


You do know how to show love in the most wonderful ways.

~*~ There was a sign on the lawn at a drug re-hab center that said 'Keep off the Grass'. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2014-03-06 08:20 AM


Thanks Jerry! What a sweet thing to say!

Loir

Jack Napes
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Phaedra's Womb
3 posted 2014-03-06 10:26 AM


You have ex's that are now likened to spoons?

All mine are more like knives and cleavers. I have the scars to prove it.

Touch, but don't look

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2014-03-06 10:33 AM


I only philfered your phrase Jack, not your meaning.  I'd have a hard time spooning with my ex's as they are 6ft under.

Lori

Jack Napes
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5 posted 2014-03-06 11:11 AM


In that case, I apologize for my careless levity.

Touch, but don't look

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
6 posted 2014-03-06 11:23 AM


No need to apologize, I divorced them first.

Lori

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2014-03-13 10:17 PM


enjoyed...James
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