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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea

0 posted 2014-03-01 04:29 AM



The life is very short,
Some stars in the sky,
Some loves
And You must go away,

The life is a sugar cube,
She dissolves
In a glass of water,

The life is very short,
A star at which we look,
It is necessary to look for the soul mate
To be invited there …

© Copyright 2014 yann rolland - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2014-03-01 07:46 AM


Yes indeed, Yann, Life has us by the short hairs, you betcha.

~*~ People who think they know everything are a great annoyance to those of us who do. ~*~

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
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a 'Universalist' !
2 posted 2014-03-01 08:49 AM


YES indeed !
Jack Napes
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since 2014-02-22
Posts 290
Phaedra's Womb
3 posted 2014-03-01 11:38 AM


It's such a long trip, I wouldn't want to make it alone. For some, all they have is stars. Maybe  that's enough. Your offering is warm and easy on the senses poetry.

Touch, but don't look

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
4 posted 2014-03-02 01:29 AM


Maybe not as short as we think, yann. Enjoyed your thoughts.
                                Ida

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
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California U.S.A
5 posted 2014-03-02 04:19 PM


It is in the invitation,
when one is invited.
Enjoyed Yann,
Ms. E

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
6 posted 2014-03-04 12:44 PM


thanks Jerry, bruce, Jack, Ida and Ebony, for reading and gentle comments,

best wishes

yann


springtao
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since 2014-03-04
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7 posted 2014-03-04 08:05 PM


much enjoyed
JamesMichael
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8 posted 2014-03-13 10:16 PM


nice...James
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