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Open Poetry #49

Satin Shoulders

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2014-03-01 09:03 PM

a tickle of the ivories
gigolos and gigolettes turn
in your direction

lessons well learned
amidst the smoke,
and the stale smell of lager

netted legs
and vials of love for sale
you play it with a slow, bluesy swing

Satin shoulders
begs your touch in E
and the tears begin to well

the foreign grinner
laughs up his puke
as his bottle demands equal time

Satin shoulders
looks to your fingers
for wisdom and truth

the foreigner slaps her behind
and trollies off
with her in tow

over her satin shoulders
she looks back at you...

as you make the key change

...just bein' Bluesy

[This message has been edited by Bluesy Socrateaser (03-01-2014 11:08 PM).]

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2014-03-01 10:18 PM

I absolutely do love this one Blue.

~*~ People who think they know everything are a great annoyance to those of us who do. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2014-03-01 11:27 PM

Me too Max!

Lori

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

3 posted 2014-03-02 12:34 PM

ohhhhh this was so very sweet..

a wonderful piece of writing my friend

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