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Saluting with misty eyes

0 posted 2014-02-21 09:38 AM


He sits alone watching his world go by
Homeless    Unkempt    Unloved
His face graying as quickly as his hair
Shelter given by the warmth of the bus station
Sitting alone as a table, ignored by all
Begging,it would seem, for companionship
Though saying not a word to any who passed by
He checks, on occasion, the refuse left by others
Wishing for a scrap deemed inedible
Save for the likes of this downtrodden soul
Who, finding none, returns to the sanctity of his mind
An hour I watch his routine, two, three as my coffee grows cold
Nothing changes, his schedule kept by some unseen time
I resign myself to the one, simple fact
Taught to me from the age of reasoning
My brother's keeper    My duty   My need
The bus arrives as Hamilton appears at my hand
To pass along surreptitiously with no flare
So as to save the shred of dignity that might remain
Yet, he is gone, no longer perched upon his rock
His routine shattered in the instant I look away
I spot him walking away from the coffee counter
My shock multiplied by the many bags in his hands
I followed him out trying to catch my bus
Watching in awe as the bags, presumed to be his
Appeared in the hands of the forgotten dwellers
Those denizens of the frozen concrete outside
His deed done, a silver case slips from his pocket
As I stand amazed, a single Dunhill enters his lips
Inhaled     Held there    Released
A smile in his eyes, looking at me, I hear his voice
“not all, as they say, is as it seems”
Then, he turns and walking away
Leaves me pondering the lesson I have been taught this day

Hey all....
I hope you enjoy my first scribble back... I have been by to read your thoughts, but have been more working on full length and song writing the past few. Please let me know where improvements might be made

http://www.governingmurphy.com

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In The Mirror
1 posted 2014-02-21 10:04 AM


I like this read, being familiar with similar scenes in various places. You hear more about them now thanks to the internet.

A lesson to be acknowledged..."nothing is as it seems". Sometimes, people are not as they seem.


Even though it reads as your own experience, it's a good story that many will relate to.

...just bein' Bluesy

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2014-02-21 10:06 AM


Welcome back. I don't know you, but that matters not. There are a few souls who walk the mean streets and pass on parts of their wealth, such as it may be, to those in need. I guess there isn't nearly enough of these giving souls, but the fact that they are out there means the world isn't as cold a place as some would have us to believe.

~*~ It's not that the man did not know how to juggle, he just didn't have the balls to do it. ~*~

latearrival
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3 posted 2014-02-21 10:18 AM


Yes indeed Ringo.So many here in Florida.The beach and the sun draws them here. They sleep any where they can, often in the woods. Many are indeed more than they seem.I like to report that our areas are good about taking Homeless into shelters to give them a warm place to sleep on the nights it does get cold, as it did this February. They have a bite to eat and clothes are available for those who need something. Good people do try and some are helped. Sadly many are passed by. Thank you for your outlook,  jo perry  
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