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Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2015-12-16 03:20 PM

Noah and the fish

A fisher man waits
Lines carefully caste out
As dawn breaks the night

The bobbin dips
Ripples cascade from the line
Now the fight begins

One never knows what the day brings

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

[This message has been edited by Juju (12-17-2015 01:42 AM).]

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

1 posted 2015-12-16 04:17 PM

Beauty in your image and optimistic expectation blended metaphorically in your poetry.

I need to think about what I just said, taking care to avoid any hooks twirling about my head and shoulders.

88's friend

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2015-12-16 06:57 PM

Yes indeed, Juju, and a fight to the death is everything works out alright.

~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2015-12-16 07:37 PM

Nice poetry, the last line, profound, and it speaks to the best part of life...

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2015-12-17 12:27 PM

enjoyed reading this...james

Mr Martini
Member
Posts 366
Beneath The Line

5 posted 2015-12-17 12:45 PM

"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts"

Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Your poem is delightful Juju, though I know your efforts and they all are fine offerings.

The term 'deep thoughts' must appeal to you as I see you like Tori Amos's quote on your signature. Like many things given to the beholder, "deep" is a relative perception to me because I've never had anyone explain its meaning to me in terms of thought.

I recall heads using the term, but they were too stoned at the time to explain it. Its like Plato's plight. You just sit there and stare at it until you go over the deep end.

Deep end...?

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

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