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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2015-12-13 09:26 AM



Without you
life will go on
it's true,
but there won’t be
that something special
to look forward to.
That little gift
I get to open.
Every day I’m hopin’
I’ll get a little lift
from you.
A bluer sky may await,
a finer time
a better date.
No matter
what you do,
there is only one of you.

LGR©12/13/15

© Copyright 2015 Lori Grosser Rhoden - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2015-12-13 09:38 AM


Tellin' it like it is, Lori, so happy you are happy.

~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2015-12-13 10:22 AM


Very lovely, dear Lori.

Margherita

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
3 posted 2015-12-13 03:29 PM


nice and fine !
JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
4 posted 2015-12-15 12:55 PM


Lady, this is beautiful!!

Love it.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana
5 posted 2015-12-15 03:38 PM


I agree with all of the 'above' Miss Lori, but who is the 'only one'?

In my not too lucid imagination, I see your arm extended with an index finger pointing all around this really cool blue room filled with people and your eyes have been blindfolded and your spinning around and around...then stop!

Okay, you've stopped and the blindfold is removed...who is it that you're pointing at?


Inquiring minds want to know.


88' guesses takes too long!

  

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
6 posted 2015-12-15 03:49 PM


TF,
whomever the shoe fits cinderfella!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2015-12-17 12:24 PM


very nice writing...james
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