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Open Poetry #49

I Couldn't Be Mistaken...

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite

since 2002-11-07

Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2014-02-13 03:01 AM

Pale blue rippling over black satin linens
So soft a sound from each rising tide
Skimming a stone over waters of wishes
I couldn't be mistaken
...even in this life

Thoughts bearing visions pretending deceptions
Love lasting longer than money could buy
A promise of virtues left unattended
I couldn't be mistaken
...even in this life

Felt on the breezes of breath from her sighing
Longings of lovers left spent in the night
Her shining lips now speak of her passion
I couldn't be mistaken
...even in this light.

...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2014-02-13 06:21 AM

Hey Bluesy!
Another lyrical piece this morning. Music to my ears! Loved it!

Lori

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2014-02-13 08:03 AM

Like this one.

~*~ Life is simpler when you plow around the stump. ~*~

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

3 posted 2014-02-13 09:01 PM

sometimes we see the best with our eyes closed..

blind luck, blind trust, blind truth..

if love wasnt blind i wonder if anyone would have ever got together..

love is... our evolution

great piece here Bluesy..

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