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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2015-03-09 12:18 PM




Spring sun shines lingering warm
Windows open to let winter out
Calves frolic in the still brown pastures
Wheat greens the furrowed fields
Garden soil is tilled and ready
Crocus crouch just below the surface
Full are the nests, burrows and dens
Buzzards wheeling eager to begin spring cleaning


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jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
1 posted 2015-03-09 12:35 PM


Very Nice!  Can't wait!  I basically missed spring (fabulous as it was) last year because of surgery - this spring may well be just as good, nature wise, with all the rain we've had.
Wild flowers should be just beautiful and prolific!  Got my camera ready, the will and the way too, of course --- Not as agile as I once was but Can't Wait!!

Enjoyed


j.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2015-03-09 01:10 PM


Only you would know to include that last line, Lori. The poem was glorifying the coming of spring and the buzzards were destroying what winter left behind. Stunning perceptive!

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

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