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Professor Gloom
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0 posted 2012-05-11 06:44 AM



Each year, without fear, the end comes closer,
From hospital bed, I hear what’s said,
The end might be getting closer,
But to their surprise, I opened my eyes
And moved away once more.

Without fear I continue the year, returning home,
Here I wait, for the fate of cats left alone
Rescued by a friendly neighbor’s concern
The shelter took them away (t’was the SPCA)
I wait for my friend’s safe return.

Gloom

(Saturn, Phantom, and Pan returned safely yesterday.)

© Copyright 2012 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2012-05-11 07:23 AM


Oh my...hugs. (I hadn't read yours until I'd posted.)

Glad to hear the planets are all aligned, though.


Startime1955
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2 posted 2012-05-11 09:49 AM


So glad I read this poem...I am so glad your friends are back...good writing...
ethome
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3 posted 2012-05-11 03:05 PM


Very touching.
I felt this.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

ebonygirl
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4 posted 2012-05-13 01:40 AM


Meeting a new day without fear is a great way to
live... surrounded by
your friends makes life even better.
Enjoyed your poem Prof. Gloom.
Smiles, ms. e

Marchmadness
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5 posted 2012-05-14 10:46 PM


So happy to hear from you Professor and glad that your little friends have returned safely.
                       Ida

miscellanea
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6 posted 2012-05-15 10:09 AM


Just stopped in for an occasional visit and happened by
your poem.   A very touching one.   It is good all are re-united at home.  Be well, Professor.

Miscellanea

Professor Gloom
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7 posted 2012-05-16 03:32 PM


Thank you all for taking the time to read my humble words and then to take the time to respond.
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8 posted 2012-06-08 04:11 PM


I'm glad you're better and have your friends with you once again... best wishes for you all.
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