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Open Poetry #48

Spring Passing (#2)

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2012-04-15 08:02 PM

      Spring Passing (#2)

Here in these ancient hills,
where rain, forest,
lake, mind, and time,
become one …
Spring is spinning
sunbeams, promises,
and fallen flowers,
into a finely etched dream-
tapestry of endless renewal,
eternal hope, lasting joy,
   and perfect love,
before simply moving on …
without a care!

            --- b. e. adams  (4/15/2012)

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

1 posted 2012-04-17 03:37 AM

What a lovely tapestry of dreams you have spun here, Bruce.
Ida

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

2 posted 2012-04-17 08:15 AM

We often try to personify the seasons; but the truth of it, as you've shown here, is that they just ARE. It is a grand solidarity, and comforting.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2012-04-17 11:29 AM

a finely etched dream-
tapestry of endless renewal,
eternal hope, lasting joy,
and perfect love,

now that's wonderful, positive, alive poetry.

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

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