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garysgirl
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0 posted 2012-04-08 11:58 AM


~*~
The sun that shines through trees
The wind that blows in breeze
My sky, when I gaze above
My heart, my dear sweet Love
~
My heart so full, feels will burst
When I want a drink, you fill my thirst
If I am starved, you fill my hunger
Whatever I lose, your love will still linger
~
My sweet Love, you are my everything
Even your presence makes my heart sing
Always there for me, in whatever we endeavor
Together Love, for always and forever
~*~

© Copyright 2012 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 2012-04-08 12:47 PM


Poems of love don't get any better than this explicit one from you, garysgirl. As someone remarked to me a week or so ago,"Love looks good on you."

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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2 posted 2012-04-08 12:55 PM


Enjoyed your poem.
Ms.  E

Margherita
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3 posted 2012-04-08 02:15 PM


Dear Ethel, how very nice to find you back here with such a beautiful love poem, full of feelings and gratitude for the gift of love.

Hugs.
Margherita

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4 posted 2012-04-08 10:33 PM


Like this...James
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5 posted 2012-04-09 12:46 PM


Isn't it amazing how everything becomes so vibrant when we let love in?  It's in full bloom here in your poem, sort of like the dance of light passing through a prism, only it's dancing in your heart!     ~K
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6 posted 2012-04-09 01:11 PM


Ethel...You still got it. Thanks for sharing. Glad you are back...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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7 posted 2012-04-10 09:24 AM


What a wonderful treat it is to see you here again! And what beautiful lines of love you've given us! *S* Welcome back!!
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8 posted 2012-04-10 03:16 PM


Lovely and creative
enjoyed

l'artiste
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9 posted 2012-04-16 04:10 PM


I absolutely adore this poem, the feelings and emotions of someone truly in love. <3
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10 posted 2012-04-16 05:12 PM


Beautifully says all there is to say, my friend... good to read you again...

j.

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11 posted 2012-06-26 01:10 AM


Thank you al, my friends. I appreciate all your sweet comments you all left.
Hugs,
Ethel

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