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icebox
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2012-04-01 02:48 AM



blank spots on a wall

clearing vacant memories

dust in empty wind


©2012 icebox





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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2012-04-01 05:30 AM



Great thoughts, inspiring imagery, dear Charly!


Memories resist:

allergic minds react fast

to dust in the wind


Margherita

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2012-04-01 05:44 AM


wind collecting dust
eventually turns to sludge
a canvas of mud

*Sorry Ice, I just had to do it.


~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

3 posted 2012-04-01 02:53 PM


Karen checks her mail
sadder with each passing day
Charly's gone away.



I suck

But I miss you!

(Oh c'mon, that's gotta be in the top ten list of your poem replies.)



Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
4 posted 2012-04-01 03:23 PM


Empty rooms,
empty wombs...
harsh reality
remembers.




Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
5 posted 2012-04-02 02:52 AM


I won't even try. Can't touch this.
                              Ida

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
6 posted 2012-04-02 10:09 AM


Spring cleaning:
out with the old and in with the new.

Enjoyed.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Honeybee
Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
7 posted 2012-12-24 12:13 PM



Poignant haiku.....love the last line~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed. It
is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"
~Kahlil Gibran~

icebox
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383
in the shadows
8 posted 2012-12-27 08:44 AM


Thank you all.

c.

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