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voice2bheard
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0 posted 2012-12-14 02:29 AM


One hour, so many memories
One night, changes everything forever

For one person to affect another in such ways
Ways beyond any that can be described in detail

Before seeing you, it hit, a break down
The realization of seeing you that night

How nervous, yet excited, scared, yet happy
To many emoitions, unable to fight

Speechless which overcame in an instant
At the sight of your car, your body, your face

The walk down the stairs felt uneasy
As if uncertain in a whole new place

Then to be held by noone other than you
Finally feeling safe once again

As tears escaped, unsucessful to hold in
Trying to breathe, yet again you win

Sitting beside you as if it was the very first time
Leaning into you knowing everything is fine

Looking into your eyes, and how they were so much missed
Being severly afraid of that first kiss

Holding your hand and never wanting to let go
The tattoo on your hand, or always saying no

To be able to see you and finally touch your face
That one moment, finally in the perfect place

Laying with you while cold and bare
How everything felt, being touched there

To hold onto something, with every intense breath
To keep on going until theres nothing left

Hearing the words that you had to go
The only word in mind was saying no

Watching you pack, getting ready to leave
As the pain hit, like a severe disease

Walking forward heading for the door
Wanting, hoping, wishing one day for more

The chill of the wind, making it so cold
The touch of your warmth, never gets old

To be embraced and kissed, one final time
As you get into your car, hating the goodbyes

One hour, that brought you here
One night, without any fears

One hour, and those are the memories
One night, together hard to believe

One hour, that everything felt so right
One night, to realize that this is worth the fight

One hour, fulfilled with nothing but the truth
One night, that will make all nights end with the words I love you

Kate

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2012-12-14 10:20 AM


It is amazing how much we take in during the blink of a moment....

thank you for this!


voice2bheard
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2 posted 2012-12-16 03:27 AM


Your welcome! I'm glad someone else could relate to it and that you liked it!

Kate

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2012-12-24 10:30 PM


Enjoyed...James
voice2bheard
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4 posted 2012-12-27 01:51 AM


Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

Kate

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