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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
Once the shade is drawn a touch and strands of mellowed light once expected filter through the chambers as you speak of the pleasure of a moment's rest, moment's notice enveloped first in mist interfering with a confused state, when challenged for peace of mind only have thoughts of conflict before any clearing of any vapoured sky. When that time comes they all pass on yet have not yet witnessed a reason for going so soon let alone being in the nothingness tucked within the draped folds of a mind's window. Who interferes with the process of light and shadow on walled supports fallen then to floors and passages in the nowhere places as one speaks of life eternal but one senses the temporary mundane dessert at meal's end. That challenge, a distraction to say one exists, glimpses at the burst of life sound, love and fury before any mists lift of any sky mounted on lids of all a moment's peace lifts from the captive jar which contained that spirit that would otherwise elope with confused thoughts and the interfered have not yet lived, their lives put on hold for time's passing. It is the confused moment interfering with a peace of mind that minds the passing of peace the twist of weather vane bore that final gust of life not yet lived or shortly lived in passing. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Interesting writing with good rhythm, now I know why your called the word wizard! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
This, to me is like a sort of Zen art.. Zen and the art of "nothingness tucked within the draped folds of a mind's window" It requires a bit of meditation to realize what your point is, but once the haze clears, all is revealed. The title is perfect. |
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