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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams

0 posted 2012-02-22 02:45 PM


The Snow Fall

Snow falls
Trees' arms stretch out
Ever green...

Fox hops
Snow over head
Cold feet

Wind Blows
Swallows jest
Who waits for spring?


Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
1 posted 2012-02-22 05:17 PM


Waiting just adds to the longing, my friend.
Catching it on the run means "together"...

Cool write.

j.

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
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California U.S.A
2 posted 2012-02-23 01:19 AM


Pretty snow fall picture, enjoyed.
Ms. E

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
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Australia
3 posted 2012-02-23 07:29 AM


this is gorgeous!

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing

MICHELMAS
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since 2012-02-15
Posts 305
Lancashire England
4 posted 2012-02-23 11:55 AM


like a clean white blanket
lovely
Michael

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2012-02-29 04:23 PM


Nice...James
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