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Open Poetry #48

Winter Evening (reworked)

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2013-01-17 11:21 AM

Winter Evening

The pensive sun sets...
a mystic, cloud-captured
moon arrives
with a roar of silence,
and the frosty breath
of twilight,
on this Winter evening
tasting of transience.
Though we are but
passing apparitions ...
moonlit shadows wavering
in the Winter wind,
everyone’s 'story'…
is a quintescent verse
in the music of Life,
a vibrant arabesque
in “Deep-Time’s”
ever-elegant, eternal
dance!

--- b. e. adams (jan. 17, 2013)

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-01-17 11:55 AM

Only you can capture the essence of a rising moon at twilight. You give the moment an energy that is deserves and a description of life itself . . .

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

2 posted 2013-01-17 01:09 PM

I love this haunting, ethereal wisp of eternity, Bruce, just as it is meant to be.

Owl

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