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luminosity
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since 2005-11-18
Posts 813


0 posted 2012-11-17 11:08 AM


prayers for the rason why
#10 better safe reprayed

oh and I could
for I am the one writing this
end it happily
I could tell you all
that the wall came down
rock by rock
and that I am typing
tremble free

but this anniversary day
touched the walled away pain
the one I thought so bravely to
unearth

and

I remember why the wall.

Forgive me Lord
this lack of trust
this wall…
for You have protected me.
Loved me.

Saved me.

Lord you have held me in Your
hands when I could not stand
and I know
that better than me
You understand the wall.
Abide with me
here in this place
I trust You.
The wall will crumble
in its time
I trust in Your power and might,
for this day after
I have not the strength
Lord I pray every tremble
leads my thoughts
to You…


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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2012-11-17 11:57 AM


We all have someone, or something, to trust in completely, and you have the Lord. A good choice. Communicating with your friend will give you strength that none of us here in the Blue Room can, even though we try. I am encouraged with this poem that you can actually see the light. That makes me happy.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2012-11-17 07:27 PM


Enjoyed...James
JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
3 posted 2012-11-19 07:14 PM


“I have not the strength
Lord I pray every tremble
leads my thoughts
to You…”

What we see as failure, or weakness, He sees as one of His children needing a hug.
He said He would never leave you or forsake you.
And that He was in you as you are in Him.
He has your “6”, you are loved.


JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

suthern
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
4 posted 2012-12-14 12:26 PM


I remember why the wall.

However long we need it is how long it needs to stand... If just one grain falls each year, He'll still be there holding our hand and drying our tears. (((HUGS))) my friend. Anniversaries tend to be pain-laden... sometimes we heap it on ourselves.

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
5 posted 2012-12-14 12:37 PM


I pray that for you too, luminosity.

Owl

luminosity
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since 2005-11-18
Posts 813

6 posted 2012-12-18 01:14 PM


thank you.......all of you......I make it through this time of year by writing and with the help of friends like you
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