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Inspired-8
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Pluto

0 posted 2012-11-08 12:24 PM



Comes the day
Soon or when
This heart can stay
So far away till then

Comes the night
So long in wait
Our loves entwined
We can only anticipate

For now alas
You're so far-way
Wishing days to pass
If and when comes the day


for Michelle...


c2012vduna

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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1 posted 2012-11-08 07:19 AM


Waiting on someone we love is always difficult.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Poppy
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since 2012-11-08
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UK
2 posted 2012-11-08 11:09 AM


Never an easy call to make.

Enjoyed.

Poppy ~xx~

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Victoria
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3 posted 2012-12-02 09:08 AM


A tortuous situation,my heart goes out to you.
~V~

Ethern
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since 2010-07-01
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on a plane
4 posted 2012-12-02 04:45 PM


i like it
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2012-12-03 07:41 PM


Nice writing...James
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