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When I lose myself
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When I lose myself |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 * * * When I lose myself in the contemplation of You, I drift into thin air spheres beyond any earthly distraction. My mind whirls in rhythmic circles like a dancing dervish with eagle wings losing touch of the ground in search of divine self, dying to any worldly sound. Universe then opens its levees and invites me to glide upon its mystical itineraries where I am showered by infinitely soothing soul whispers shared in butterfly choreographies. When I lose myself in contemplation of Your reflection I discover a well of revelation. All the fragments of life’s mysteries suddenly fall into place to induce a feeling of peace, where all the answers are disclosed in the radiance of Your beloved face. * * * |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes indeed, Margherita, when we lose ourselves into the glory and magic of a loved one it is the most wonderful feeling we can ever imagine. And you write so very well about it. Well done! ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Startime1955 Senior Member
since 2012-04-22
Posts 1072Alberta, Canada |
Oh my...I absolutely love this poem...with vision and words you paint a love profound...*BIG HUGS* *may our dreams ever be magical* |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
It is always a pleasure to read you, Margherita. Ida |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Margherita your spirit radiates here. No one speaks of the wonders of His world like you do. I'm grateful you are here to share that with us. Lori  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I keep reading you over and over so one day I can grow up and use words the way you do... much enjoyed, my friend, as usual... j. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Enjoyable read, and visual contemplation... JL Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Jerry, for your loving comment."Glory and magic" are indeed the qualities of the Beloved. A love profound it is, yes, dear Karen. Thank you for your loving kindness. Thank you, dear Ida, for your always kind appreciation. And I am grateful for your visit here and for your understanding, dear Lori. Thank you! Smiling, dear Jimmy, at your sweet comment. Thank you for expressing your enjoyment. Thank you, dear JL, for stopping by and liking this. Love to all, Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
fine writing, true words and yet so well written.  "The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you so much, dear Poet friends, James and Prasad, for your kind comments. Margherita |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Love, Eric |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..yes, a poem which pleases one ever so effortlessly, O Margherita.. ..spiros ~~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Eric and dear Spiros, for your loving comments. Love, Margherita |
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